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Offline Ajnabi

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kal raat
« on: October 14, 2009, 03:14 PM »
kal raat
chand ko dekh kar
ek ajeeb sa ahsaas hoa
dil ki dharkanon ney
dhire sey kuch kaha
tumhara dil
chand k jesa ha chamakta hoa
mager
phir dil ney kaha
k chand main tu dag ha
mager
tumhara dil
bilkol saaf ha
is tarah
jis tarah shaffaf aaiyena
aur is aayeney main
sirf ek he tasweer ha
jo mere ha......
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Offline Super boy

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Re: kal raat
« Reply #1 on: October 15, 2009, 03:14 PM »
very nice sharing  shakehandnn
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Ghalat Jagah Te Laayii,Ghaltii Sadii Si
Utto'n Keeti Laa Parwayii,Ghaltii Sadi Si
Ohda Kuj Gya Nai Saada Kuj Rehya Nai
Bewafa Naal Layi Yarii Ghaltii Sadii Si...!!!

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Re: kal raat
« Reply #2 on: October 21, 2009, 02:49 PM »
VERY NICE SHARING  0133
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Offline Samera

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Re: kal raat
« Reply #3 on: November 27, 2009, 08:28 PM »
nice sharing  for sharing
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Re: kal raat
« Reply #4 on: November 29, 2009, 01:55 PM »
 thumbsss thumbsss very nice poetry
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Re: kal raat
« Reply #5 on: January 20, 2010, 08:41 PM »
very nice sharing
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Bhlay Cheen lo muj sy meri jawani.
Mager muj ko lota do Bajpan ka sawan.
Wo kaghaz ki kashti wo barish ka pani.

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Re: kal raat
« Reply #6 on: December 15, 2010, 07:48 AM »
very nice
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